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Mar 16, 2013Love_Legolas_111 rated this title 3 out of 5 stars
I just picked this up at the library and thought it would be good. It was cute (I admit) but I was dissapointed. I knew almost what the ending was in the middle of the book. Very predictable. It almost sounded like my fiction writing (which is not that great). If the author had given more details and really built on the story, it could be even better. Good for younger readers(say, 10 and under), but for more advanced, well...just if you have nothing else to do. Good story line though and pretty creative. Also, it was better than "The Thirteenth Princess" so it just shows that with practice, writing can get better and better. Read "Princess of the Wild Swans". Much, much better details and characters!